Update, September 19, 2008: Dalton was scheduled to appear on Ellen Degeneres’s program on Thursday, September 18; did you see it? What do you think?
Taylor Mali is one of my usual suspects for inspiring teachers. He does a great job, with just a tinge of profanity (appropriately placed, many teachers argue – if they ask for it, you have to give it to them).
This year’s inspiration for Dallas teachers comes from Dalton Sherman, a fifth grader at Charles Rice Learning Center. Here’s a YouTube video of the presentation about 20,000 of us watched last Wednesday, a small point that redeemed the annual “convocation” exercise, for 2008:
Sherman’s presentation rescued what had been shaping up as another day of rah-rah imprecations to teachers who badly wanted, and in my case needed, to be spending time putting classrooms together.
(By the way, at the start of his presentation, you can see several people leap to their feet in the first row — Mom, Dad, and older brother. Nice built-in cheering section.)
Staff at DISD headquarters put the speech together for Dalton to memorize, and he worked over the summer to get it down. This background is wonderfully encouraging.
First, it makes a statement that DISD officials learn from mistakes. Last year the keynote was given by a speaker out of central casting’s “classic motivational speaker” reserves. As one teacher described it to me before the fete last Wednesday, “It was a real beating.”
Second, DISD’s planning ahead to pull this off suggests someone is looking a little bit down the road. This was a four or five month exercise for a less-than-10 minute presentation. It’s nice to know someone’s looking ahead at all.
Third, the cynical teachers gave Dalton Sherman a warm standing ovation. That it was delivered by a 10-year-old kids from DISD made a strong symbol. But the content was what hooked the teachers. Superintendent Michael Hinojosa provided a death-by-PowerPoint presentation leading up to the speech, one that was probably not designed solely as contrasting lead in. In other words, Dalton Sherman’s speech demonstrated as nothing else the district has done lately that someone downtown understands that the teachers count, the foot soldiers in our war on ignorance and jihad for progress.
The kids came back Monday, bless ’em. School’s in session, to anyone paying attention.
Resources:
- Dallas Morning News story on Sherman and his methods
- Dallas Morning News version of the video (not squashed – better quality on some computers)
- Full text, as provided in an opposite-editorial page piece in the Dallas Morning News
Full text of Dalton Sherman’s speech to Dallas Independent School District teachers, August 20, 2008:
I believe in me. Do you believe in me?
Do you believe I can stand up here, fearless, and talk to all 20,000 of you?
Hey, Charles Rice Learning Center – do you believe in me?
That’s right – they do.
Because here’s the deal: I can do anything, be anything, create anything, dream anything, become anything – because you believe in me. And it rubs off on me.
Let me ask you a question, Dallas ISD.
Do you believe in my classmates?
Do you believe that every single one of us can graduate ready for college or the workplace?
You better. Because next week, we’re all showing up in your schools – all 157,000 of us – and what we need from you is to believe that we can reach our highest potential.
No matter where we come from, whether it’s sunny South Dallas, whether its Pleasant Grove, whether its Oak Cliff or North Dallas or West Dallas or wherever, you better not give up on us. No, you better not.
Because, as you know, in some cases, you’re all we’ve got. You’re the ones who feed us, who wipe our tears, who hold our hands or hug us when we need it. You’re the ones who love us when sometimes it feels like no else does – and when we need it the most.
Don’t give up on my classmates.
Do you believe in your colleagues?
I hope so. They came to your school because they wanted to make a difference, too. Believe in them, trust them and lean on them when times get tough – and we all know, we kids can sometimes make it tough.
Am I right?
Can I get an Amen?
So, whether you’re a counselor or a librarian, a teacher assistant or work in the front office, whether you serve up meals in the cafeteria or keep the halls clean, or whether you’re a teacher or a principal, we need you!
Please, believe in your colleagues, and they’ll believe in you.
Do you believe in yourself? Do you believe that what you’re doing is shaping not just my generation, but that of my children – and my children’s children?
There’s probably easier ways to make a living, but I want to tell you, on behalf of all of the students in Dallas, we need you. We need you now more than ever.
Believe in yourself.
Finally, do you believe that every child in Dallas needs to be ready for college or the workplace? Do you believe that Dallas students can achieve?
We need you, ladies and gentlemen. We need you to know that what you are doing is the most important job in the city today. We need you to believe in us, in your colleagues, in yourselves and in our goals.
If you don’t believe – well, I’m not going there.
I want to thank you for what you do – for me and for so many others.
Do you believe in me? Because I believe in me. And you helped me get to where I am today.
Thank you.
Ms. Lilienfeld,
I’m sure the copyright is held by Dalton Sherman or his family. I do not have contact information for them.
Sherman graduated high school last year; last news I had, he was attending Pomona College. Perhaps you can reach him there.
If you have to get rights quickly, I’d say use the speech and list it as copyright unclear. My understanding is that the Dallas ISD put a team of writers on the speech, whether it was one he started with or not. Consequently, DISD might have a copyright claim — but they rarely do, and they spread the YouTube version for public use.
Invite anyone who has information the speech is not public domain to get you in contact with the copyright holder.
If Sherman holds the copyright, he’d probably authorize its use in a text.
You may want to try to contact him through his last school in Dallas, the Barack Obama Male Leadership Academy. Here you’ll find contact information:
http://www.dallasisd.org/domain/2253
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I need permission to use text from Do you believe in me? in a school textbook for distribution in Malawi. Who to approach?
:-(
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Fake, how do you know he didn’t write it? I had several teachers convinced in fifth grade that my mom was writing my essay and reports because they couldn’t believe that a fifth grader was writing as well as an adult.
I doubt I was the only student able to and smart enough to write beyond his years.
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February 12, 2014 — Where are all you visitors coming from?
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[…] people fawned over the kid and his speech. But he never had any hand in writing it. It wasn’t his voice at all but it was used to say, “this is the voice of students, […]
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SHelbi writes, incoherently,:
our own presdint dosnt even write his own speeches
Oh please tell me you’re not being stupid enough to attempt to bash the President for not writing his own speeches.
Tell me…did you ever watch the movie The American President? See that Michael J Fox guy in that movie? Want to know what his character’s role was in that administration?
That’s right…speechwriter.
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that little black boy better rock it
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i think that this little boy got some talent and i think that this is the next mini obama and yes i beilive in you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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ok im sorry but i dont care if hes black or white, 10 or 40, and i dont eb\ven care if he wrote the thing or not if ur aginst this kid you go and do the same thing without any help and with out practice because you’ll fail our own presdint dosnt even write his own speeches and hes had public speaking classes aswell so if your bashing on this boy u might as well bash on obama. and whoever said that if a little white boy did the same thing. look at all of our other presidents people need to learn respect!!!!
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Great speech. It doesn’t matter if he wrote it and practiced it or not. It’s a good reminder for all of us to really nurture our children and help them reach their full potential. Believe!!
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the speech of that kid is so amazing that he amazed her teachers
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Got this e-mail this morning (August 14, 2009):
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Race? You pulled race into it? Have you become so frustrated that you’ve missed the message? Find a new job. That kid, with practice or not, nailed it. Since you’re so perfect, you step in front of the district and give a motivational speech. But, write it yourself and don’t get it edited and don’t practice it. You’ll look like a tool. Every speaker there practiced their speech. Do us a favor and leave the career. To hold fear because of the success of a 10 year old is pathetic. You need to leave. To throw race into it? That’s even worse. Maybe that isn’t the message you wanted to send???? However, your message clearly states: “I suck because a 10 year old is better than me.” Get a life.
Oh, just in case you think I’m black…. I’m white, from Montana and teach in Las Vegas.
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This speech is a joke. Hid not write it and practiced for FIVE months with an oratory coach and anyone who would have listened to him to deliver a speech that, once again, he did NOT write. A three year could have done the same job This was simply a staged stunt. Does anyone think that if a little white boy had delivered the speech that it would have been lauded as much?
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I haven’t had time to look at the issue, really.
Basically, I don’t think we should bend science instruction to accommodate superstition. I thought the fellow’s statement invited misinterpretation. Had he said, “We need to be respectful of religious beliefs,” I’d buy it. But instead, he said England ought to include instruction on creationism
I regard creationism as not only disproven science, but also as crackpot religion. It’s a new, minority view in any religion. For those of us who are Christian, I would think the inherent dishonesty of creationist dogma would be an issue of great concern.
Should the guy have resigned? I gather that his goof was enough that the Royal Society was quite hamstrung — if they make exceptions for Darbyist superstition, what superstition can they then ignore?
Does that help?
Our friend P. Z. Myers has some stronger opinions at Pharyngula.
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Hi Ed,
ot, but I was thinking you would have a post on this… I was interested in the case. Any comments ?
Cheers,
T.
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I have not been so proud and inspired by any message I’ve ever heard . Not from any Pastor or any Politician than I am so inspired by Dalton Sherman,even to tears and a new look at the man in my mirror.
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We have a duty to believe in our children. Every child we believe in, becomes one less child who fails. Yes Dalton, I believe in you.
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Thank you for re-inspiring me to believe in what I’ve been doing since 1969!
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I’m stealing this comment from another blog that posted the video, Welcome to NCS Tech!:
Amen.
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